Read the announcement letter below.find ten mistakes in writing a formal announcement letter and correct them! As you know, we have recently expanded our facili
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Read the announcement letter below.find ten mistakes in writing a formal announcement letter and correct them! As you know, we have recently expanded our facility. We have added a pool, increased the size of our workout room, and begun offering free day care. To help offset the cost of construction, we must increase our family membership fees by $25, effective immediately. If you renewed your membership last month you will not be assessed the additional $25 fee until your next renewal date.
Doe Spa now offers swimming, weight lifting, ice skating, and aerobic conditioning for the entire family. And even with the higher price, we offer one the lowest prices in the state. We appreciate your support and hope that you will continue to choose Doe Spa as the place for your family's fitness.
Doe Spa now offers swimming, weight lifting, ice skating, and aerobic conditioning for the entire family. And even with the higher price, we offer one the lowest prices in the state. We appreciate your support and hope that you will continue to choose Doe Spa as the place for your family's fitness.
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Baca surat pengumuman di bawah ini. Temukan sepuluh kesalahan dalam menulis surat pengumuman resmi dan perbaiki! Seperti yang Anda tahu, kami baru saja memperluas fasilitas kami. Kami telah menambahkan kolam, meningkatkan ukuran ruang latihan kami, dan mulai menawarkan perawatan siang gratis. Untuk membantu mengimbangi biaya konstruksi, kita harus meningkatkan biaya keanggotaan keluarga sebesar $ 25, efektif segera. Jika Anda memperbarui keanggotaan Anda bulan lalu, Anda tidak akan dinilai biaya tambahan $ 25 hingga tanggal pembaruan berikutnya.
Doe Spa sekarang menawarkan berenang, angkat berat, seluncur es, dan pengkondisian aerobik untuk seluruh keluarga. Dan bahkan dengan harga yang lebih tinggi, kami menawarkan salah satu harga terendah di negara bagian ini. Kami menghargai dukungan Anda dan berharap Anda akan terus memilih Doe Spa sebagai tempat untuk kebugaran keluarga Anda.